Transition

Category: Writers Block

Post 1 by dream lady (move over school!) on Sunday, 04-Mar-2007 18:14:55

Beyond emptiness there is fulfillment,
Beyond disappointment renewal,
Beyond hopelessness hope,
Beyond despair friendship,
Beyond tragedy triumph,
Beyond restlessness peace,
Beyond weakness courage,
Beyond pain healing,
Beyond shattered dreams new dreams,

Beyond grief acceptance,
Beyond transition moving on.

Post 2 by blbobby (Ooo you're gona like this!) on Monday, 19-Mar-2007 3:49:30

Very good. Most of your poetry is positive and hopeful, and this is no exception.

Thanks.
Bob

Post 3 by jessmonsilva (Taking over the boards, one topic at a time.) on Monday, 19-Mar-2007 9:51:50

nice work, I like the uplifting this gives.

Post 4 by Musical Ambition (I've got the gold prolific poster award, now is there a gold cup for me?) on Monday, 19-Mar-2007 12:34:56

Yes, this is good. I like your poetry. It seems to be very inspirational and uplifting. Good job.

Post 5 by Siriusly Severus (The ESTJ 1w9 3w4 6w7 The Taskmaste) on Wednesday, 06-Feb-2008 3:03:14

Punctuation's right. Good one!